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FitzChivalry Farseer ([personal profile] tombadgerlock) wrote in [community profile] ioduanlogs 2018-02-27 03:43 am (UTC)

Re: 3

The other man tilts his head, soft hair fluffing around his face like the down on a new chick.

...a chicken is incorrect, though. Fitz has felt the mind of a chicken and this is not the case here.

"My thanks," Fitz takes the cup and lifts it with grave humour to salute Eiji. He swallows it all, then feels his nostrils wrinkle. "It is neither fresh nor entirely sour, I believe. If there is another option for dinner, perhaps we should use it. My name is..."

Fitz? Tom? Natural instincts for discretion war with the knowledge that the Fool inhabits this place also, and that others may hear him described as 'Fitz'.

"...Fitz." That will do. Very smooth, he inwardly berates himself.

On 27 February 2018 at 14:20, powertotearer - DW Comment < dw_null@dreamwidth.org> wrote:


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